tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4839044857981772582.post2201271305633494741..comments2010-03-10T12:23:40.043-08:00La Rizzhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14184344191689539587noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4839044857981772582.post-39361582360450880452010-03-10T12:17:05.205-08:002010-03-10T12:17:05.205-08:00Well done. You've made something so ordinary appear to be totally creepy and yes, suspenseful. The title however gave too much away... maybe end the story by finally revealing its surgery.Michellehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00452228796476779010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4839044857981772582.post-34156440616640304862010-03-06T06:41:25.362-08:002010-03-06T06:41:25.362-08:00Love the ending! Perfect!BohoPoetGirlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02945125137127241775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4839044857981772582.post-84791193860063820562010-03-06T06:41:25.361-08:002010-03-06T06:41:25.361-08:00"That's what they all say." - AwesomeBohoPoetGirlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02945125137127241775noreply@blogger.com